The main part of this anim is pretty good. The start I find a bit confusing. Whats your motivation for the timing and the angle of the hands as he reaches out?
The timing (slow and easing in) looks as if he is caucious, expecting it to be hot or something, which dosn't make sense with a vending machine.
And the way the hands are bent back before he puts any weight on them is odd too.
Action the action out would help with both these issues ;)
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Hey Ben
The main part of this anim is pretty good. The start I find a bit confusing. Whats your motivation for the timing and the angle of the hands as he reaches out?
The timing (slow and easing in) looks as if he is caucious, expecting it to be hot or something, which dosn't make sense with a vending machine.
And the way the hands are bent back before he puts any weight on them is odd too.
Action the action out would help with both these issues ;)
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